Hey everyone, we just wrote up an intro to Story.ai to gain a bit of intrigue into why we’re driven to build another tool for programming. Please let me know what you think 🙂 https://medium.com/story-ai/become-a-developer-in-10-minutes-f20633bb1321

1. Too many references. Each cultural allusion only reaches a fraction of your audience, so if the goal is communication, I try to use simple language. (You might have other goals though. In which case I'm not qualified to comment..) 2. When I see a title with "...in 10 minutes" in the title, I expect it to have a set of steps I can follow in 10 minutes. Maybe you mean, "10 minutes at a time"?

Thank you for the thoughtful feedback @Kartik Agaram.

The writing style is a little bit too "on", if you know what I mean. It would maybe work on stage with a Robin Williams style kind of manic delivery but it feels a little forced in text. I love this paragraph;

So next time you ask your developer “hey can you pull this data, join it, let me pick some entries, make a dashboard, and send a summary to me monthly” just don’t ask the developer; ask the computer and have fun building it

And the 2. section on human language. I would pull that stuff right to the front because it just really captures your value and your distinguishing features.

Thanks, @Chris Knott. These suggestions also make a lot of sense.